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Birthday: November 14
Gender: Female
Location:
United States
School:
University of Hawaii, Middlebury College/Bread Loaf School of English
Work:
Instructor, Writer, Author of Spirit of the Village A Maui Memoir ISBN 0977227707 Published 2006
Hometown(s):
Maui, Hawaii
Oxford, England
Santa Fe, New Mexico
Juneau, Alaska
Renton, Vermont
Portland, Maine
Agana, Guam
Quote:
Leave a legacy. Write your story

My Journals (39)

Dear Friends,

Since my last post, I've become a new grandmother, returned to my manuscript, published in a couple magazines and started a new column.   

At the moment, I am leading a writer's workshop in memoirs at the Kaunoa Senior Center on Maui. This is the largest class I've had-18 writers. In the last year, two writers from the class completed their memoirs and published them. 

In the future, I will be scheduling two workshops per year (5 sessions) on Maui. If you are interested in joining, please write to Kaunoa for a schedule of events: 
Kaunoa Senior Center
Paia, Maui, Hawaii 96779

If there is interest, I will be happy to offer this memoir class for five straight days-some time in October, so visitors can take advantage of this opportunity, and perhaps plan a Maui vacation as well.

Please email me at jpiascarlin@gmail.com for information.

Aloha,

Jackie Pias Carlin

http://jackiepiascarlin.maui.net
http://writeonmaui.com
http://jcarlin.blog.com

 

 

 

Added: February 12, 2010
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 I’m always complaining that I don’t have enough time in the day to do all the ‘real’ writing one does to be a writer. If you’re in your twilight years like I am, we don’t have much time. (I’m kidding.)

 

One day, I started a blog. As I created and wrote each day for about a week, I discovered that a 400 word blog took me approximately two hours a day to draft, rewrite and rewrite it again. It then occurred to me (ah ha) that I really had the time to write.

 

That precious time could be used to write the ‘real’ stuff. I haven’t seen the benefits of blogging, but I have a feeling I’m about to find out. It’s not about the content, I think it’s about the words and phrases a blogger uses to attract the attention of other viewers. 

 

A few days later, I decreased the blog by several hundred words so I could have the rest of the day (or most of it) writing my screenplay, novel or whatever scheme I had brewing  at the time. I tried to remember to add words that might interest others. Really, I didn’t have to remember certain words or phrases; it’s all random.

 

Blogging reminded me of the writing process I trained myself to do years ago. I recall practicing morning pages with Julia Cameron from her book, A Vein Of Gold: A Journey to Your Creative Heart. At first, I needed a whole hour to complete three pages. I wrote every morning at my outdoor lanai, overlooking the banana plants, sipping Starbucks coffee and munching buttered toast. By the end of the month, I completed three pages in forty minutes. I was practicing to think and write faster.

 

As I got the hang of it, I also cut my blogging time to less than an hour. I decided not to get too ‘real’ about blogging. Truthfully, who’s reading it anyway? Interestingly, from the comments I received, somebody was.

 

Writing takes training like in a race. Build muscle, endurance and patience. My brain must be thick with ideas right now. Twilight years? I figure about ten-twenty more years of that. No, not as a vampire-as an AARP member.

 

I now have two blogs, one for work (I mean, I really work for a living) and the other for my writer/artist blog. In total, I give myself two hours each morning to blog, which also includes my FB and Tweet posts. 

 

Then I write.

 

Added: October 27, 2009
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 I’m always complaining that I don’t have enough time in the day to do all the ‘real’ writing one does to be a writer. If you’re in your twilight years like I am, we don’t have much time. (I’m kidding.)

 

One day, I started a blog. As I created and wrote each day for about a week, I discovered that a 400 word blog took me approximately two hours a day to draft, rewrite and rewrite it again. It then occurred to me (ah ha) that I really had the time to write.

 

That precious time could be used to write the ‘real’ stuff. I haven’t seen the benefits of blogging, but I have a feeling I’m about to find out. It’s not about the content, I think it’s about the words and phrases a blogger uses to attract the attention of other viewers. 

 

A few days later, I decreased the blog by several hundred words so I could have the rest of the day (or most of it) writing my screenplay, novel or whatever scheme I had brewing  at the time. I tried to remember to add words that might interest others. Really, I didn’t have to remember certain words or phrases; it’s all random.

 

Blogging reminded me of the writing process I trained myself to do years ago. I recall practicing morning pages with Julia Cameron from her book, A Vein Of Gold: A Journey to Your Creative Heart. At first, I needed a whole hour to complete three pages. I wrote every morning at my outdoor lanai, overlooking the banana plants, sipping Starbucks coffee and munching buttered toast. By the end of the month, I completed three pages in forty minutes. I was practicing to think and write faster.

 

As I got the hang of it, I also cut my blogging time to less than an hour. I decided not to get too ‘real’ about blogging. Truthfully, who’s reading it anyway? Interestingly, from the comments I received, somebody was.

 

Writing takes training like in a race. Build muscle, endurance and patience. My brain must be thick with ideas right now. Twilight years? I figure about ten-twenty more years of that. No, not as a vampire-as an AARP member.

 

I now have two blogs, one for work (I mean, I really work for a living) and the other for my writer/artist blog. In total, I give myself two hours each morning to blog, which also includes my FB and Tweet posts. 

 

Then I write.

 

Added: October 27, 2009
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 Write On Maui is in its seventh year. This quarterly issue features poets from Kaunoa Senior Center in Spreckelsville, Maui, Hawaii. Another writer shares her experience with surfing.

Go to www.writeonmaui.com to read. Free subscription!

Jackie

 

Added: October 5, 2009
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 It is a writer's dream to see his/her written story nationally published.

This recent story is about my experience as a bystander during my daughter's home water birth. Now that I'm a grandmother, new ideas arise occasionally and it's wonderful to see a whole new world appear. Even my artwork has changed.

To read the article, visit Grand Magazine online. http://www.grandmagazine.com/issue.asp

Let me know what you think.

Jackie

 

 

 

Added: September 22, 2009
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 It is a writer's dream to see his/her written story nationally published.

This recent story is about my experience as a bystander during my daughter's home water birth. Now that I'm a grandmother, new ideas arise occasionally and it's wonderful to see a whole new world appear. Even my artwork has changed.

To read the article, visit Grand Magazine online. http://www.grandmagazine.com/issue.asp

Let me know what you think.

Jackie

 

 

 

Added: September 22, 2009
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 I stopped writing for a month and began painting again. The word ‘relapse’ isn’t the right word to use to describe my situation. ‘Recovery’ is more like what I want to use, though it sounds as if I was in a state of ill repute before then. I wasn’t.

 

So how should I describe it? I’m not sure. 

 

During that month, I finished more than a dozen watercolors. Then the painting surge stopped. 

 

My watercolor mountain scene from I`ao Valley just wasn’t happening. So I left it, and picked up my yellow pad and pencils instead. I could attempt more material to add to my next book, and that would be a step toward the finish.

 

I stopped in at our closest coffee shop with a/c, ordered coffee and a chocolate croissant and chose a vacant table. I placed my yellow pad in front of me, laid the pencil next to it and sipped coffee from a white ceramic mug. I daydreamed for a second or more, then flipped the pages to a clean one. 

 

I like pencils that are freshly sharpened. My words develop on the page while the lead point flattens. Then I switch to another #2 Ticonderoga.

 

I started to write.

 

My first thoughts weren’t impressive, although it gave me a chance to reconsider how my days were spent. In workshops, I recommend that writers do a list to unleash their thoughts. Unconsciously, I too made a list of what I did the moment I woke up to the time I slipped under the sheets to read a book or watch a sitcom before falling asleep for the night. From the list, I realized that I only spend five hours in a day, either to paint or to write. I am really not spending much time for creativity at all.

 

Most of my day is attending to daily chores, taking care of business, and cooking/eating. However, during the hour that I was at the coffee shop, I filled five pages of my 8” x 11” pad with random thoughts that sifted on to the paper. Only the action itself can rekindle the passion I have for it. Just think of what can happen if I wrote for five hours every day.

 

Writing is creating, painting with words rather than with color. It uses instruments similar to each other, held between my first two fingers and thumb. The ideas derive from the same portion of the brain, I believe. 

 

That passion quenched for the day, I thought my mind was still for once, but I was still unsettled. I had a watercolor taped to the board, unfinished. I had problems with the subject matter, not able to concentrate on each layer, as watercolors build on layers, like writing.

 

Later last night, influenced by the full moon, I got up and painted until 3:00 a.m. in the morning. It is impossible to sleep during this phase of the moon, so I made use of the insomnia time and played with my paints. I was happy with the results and went back to bed a couple of hours later.

 

There are days when I am at my computer or at a writing pad for the entire day unencumbered by schedules or minutes on the clock. There are days when I can only paint. Classical music adds to my creativity. I appreciate my muses at these times. 

 

So how do I describe this particular state? Agitated? That might work. Something that the washer does with laundry. Mixes things up to loosen particles of dirt from the cloth. Hm. Is this a state of cleaning-washing away the BS and starting from scratch? 

 

I wonder.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Added: August 8, 2009
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 Obon

Foreign sounds floated on invisible wings through our camp that night. My father said it was obake music, ghost music. In a way, he was right. That summer, when Obon season began, my childhood in Hawai`i adopted yet another ethnic tradition, different from my own.

 

Obon is the Japanese Buddhist ceremony of remembering the departed with incense, dance and celebration. Each mission throughout Maui (and all the islands) takes turns in producing Obon, when the congregation and friends participate.

 

During Obon, joss sticks burn profusely in the temples, their curling smoke act like prayers ascending to their beloved long gone into the next world. The incense signals to the departed that they are remembered, and are welcomed to return and dance with their earth bound families.

 

When I was a child, I watched my first Obon dance standing in the dark, on the low stone wall that surrounded the Buddhist mission in Pa`ia, just next to our Filipino camp. It was not far to walk. We were like natives blazing on a narrow dirt trail between gandule bushes and tall weeds. The loud speakers already carried the melody of the strumming samisens and throaty singers. Depending on the tropical breeze, the sound floated over our houses and over the sugarcane fields for miles. 

 

We were not Japanese nor Buddhists, so we kept our distance. The dancers assemble in circles, sometimes two or three deep depending on the number of participants. I was mesmerized by the beautiful silk kimonos the women wore. They wore white tabis on their feet, and inserted them into velvet strapped tatami covered slippers. The men wore hip length hapi coats or their long traditional kimonos. They wore tabis too, but on elevated wooden footwear. Their expressions were proud and reverent.

 

The dance movements were simple hand gestures and the direction always moved forward in the circle. There was one particular dance that depicted harvesting-a shoveling gesture with two shuffles forward, left and right, and then two steps back. Then a sweeping motion of the hands on either side while again stepping ahead. The dancers repeated this combination until the music ended. I copied them on the rock wall, memorizing the steps in my brain so that when I went home, I reenacted it in my living room.

 

It wasn’t until my adult years when I realized it was all right to join in, no matter what ethnicity or religious affiliation. So I danced. Each time I danced, the emotions of my first Obon danced with me. 

 

One summer, we attended an Obon celebration in Kula, 4000 ft. above sea level on the slopes of Haleakala, the dormant volcano on Maui. The cemetery is built on the hillside of the property, so we walked downhill to view the grave sites. Paper lanterns or luau candles graced each headstone, bits of food such as oranges, candy or rice laid next to them. I heard someone translate the Japanese kanji characters on the head stone to another. The descending clouds pillowed the music and the voices.

From the bottom of the hill, I turned around to look behind me. The pine trees cast shadows of a distant Japanese countryside. Fog had settled and the golden glow from each grave set off their beacons from behind the screened mist. Someone remembered, someone had visited. The skin behind my ears prickled. I was surrounded by spirits. 

 

 

 

Glossary:

 

obake - Japanese word for ghost or spirit

 

gandule - pigeon peas

 

Pa`ia - Town that I grew up in on Maui on the Northshore

 

samisens - Japanese string instruments

 

tabis - cotton socks with soles and separated between the first and second toe, usually clasped at the ankles.

 

tatami - Japanese straw mats

 

luau - Hawaiian feast

 

Kula - Town on Maui

 

kanji - Japanese writing

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Added: July 19, 2009
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 Volume 7 Issue 3 of Write On Maui is now available online for reading. 

This issue features writers from the Kaunoa Senior Center Memoir Writing Class and a writer from O`ahu.

Simply click on "ezine" or "literary magazine" when you enter the homepage of Write On Maui. Write On Maui is a free subscription and is published quarterly.

Aloha,

Jackie

 

Added: July 13, 2009
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 'My first true love said that I didn't know how to boil water. That stunned me for a moment because subconsciously I knew my future depended on whether or not I could find a husband. My father said that after high school I should find a job and get married.'

 

Without higher education or work experience, my future was dependent on a husband. Years later, I didn't marry my first love but someone else. I became a widow and a single parent at twenty eight. These were experiences that my father did not prepare me for, but by then, I knew how to boil water. 

 

In a few minutes, I'm descending into my kitchen to prepare Gratin Dauphinois. The Gratin Dauphinois is a recipe I found in a cookbook a few years ago by Joanne Harris, the author who wrote Chocolat. I chose her other book, Coastliners, for our book club's reading for that month.

 

We had a different host each month who prepared a meal relating to the book on that night's discussion. When my turn came up with Coastliners,  I chose Gratin Dauphinois from Harris', My French Kitchen. I imagined the recipe would be just as decadent as Chocolat. It covered all my bases-inexpensive, filling and delicious. I had a green salad to go with it, and of course, bottles of wine that the club brought with them. (We were nine members at the time.)

 

I forget how the discussion went-no not really, I remember most of it, but the unforgettable comment I received was, "This is the best potatoes au gratin I've ever had." The Gratin Dauphinois was just au gratin to her. For me, I was reliving a night in Calais.

 

For dessert, I am serving a flourless chocolate cake. The recipe is from Joy of Cooking; it's so easy to make I couldn't resist. It asks for a pound of chocolate. Curiously, I have a ten pound box of chocolate that my significant other brought home to me from a past trip-maybe three years ago. He thought he covered all those missing Valentines, Mother's Day, birthdays, etc. Oddly, I never used it until now. After I cracked it against the counter to get the chunk I needed, I went to him to announce that I was finally going to use the chocolate he brought home. His blue eyes lit up against his tan eyelids, and a toothy smile spread across his bearded cheeks. I swear his eyes misted.

 

It dawned on me that he went through a lot to bring it home to Maui. He could have used the space and energy to pack car parts, tools or steel, like he normally does. I would have been happier with a slim, six ounce deep chocolate bar of organic 85% cocoa wrapped in gold. I couldn't relate to that ten pound brick. 

 

I suppose I can't expect others to feel the same way I do about anything. Learning to boil water was one step into my future. Appreciating what goes into the water and how is another. I have many more steps to go.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Added: June 29, 2009
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