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saravdw said:
on November 7, 2009 11:20 PM ET
edited on November 7, 2009 11:25 PM ET I still miss you.
The time has not cured my pain How long has it been? It seems like forever, You didn’t mean to hurt me; life took care of that, You were with me one day, And the next day, you unexpectedly ceased to exist. I still miss you, darling; I miss your laugh, I miss your footsteps in the stillness of the night I miss our walks holding hands, I even miss that sweet tobacco aroma That followed you wherever you went. Do I miss you all the time? No, Am I unhappy? No, I still have a part of you, Our lovely daughters make me happy and They remind me of you. Do I idolize your memory? No, I just miss you! Life is beautiful darling And I take it as a gift, I enjoy the little things That come my way, I am a happy Care free, and sometimes, lonely woman Who will always miss you, until... We see each other again!
Saravdw November 7, 2009
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Thank you for your nice comments Barbara. After so many years I still miss my husband, at the beginning was unbearable, but with the help of our girls and all the wonderful people around me, I learned to go on.
Sara
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Thanks Sara, I appreciate the little glimpse you gave us into your life. Your words are just so lovely. Your sentiments so open. Thanks for your story.
Sara, that's great news. Just write what's in your heart and watch the words appear. I look forward to your talent that has long been neglected. I'm sure they'll be wonderful. Thank you, Zil
I appreciate you nice words intersan. Yes, life gave me a good husband and his memory inspired me to write this poem. As you said; I will pass it on to my children as a tribute to their father.
Sara
Thank you for your kind words Zil. It is wonderful to have nice memories of our loved ones. ( I used to write poems a long time ago, but I stopped doing it for some reason, and this and one was an attemp to start again)
Sara.
Sara, a lovely tribute to your husband who you've immortalized in poetry. Yet, you have had the strength to accept life as it is and to continue on. It's simple and honest as you open your heart to others. It would be nice to pass this on to family members, especially those who will be the future generation.
Absolutely beautiful. Such a love, such a memory which carries you through. He wouldn't want it any other way, I'm sure. You've treasured the memories and that's what matters so hold on tight. That's what I do and am happier for it, I just miss him. Thank you (and you told me you couldn't write) Zil
Thank you Darksong, I am glad you liked it.
Sara
